foe faux

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far deeper than exclamatory
the truth from each heart's dormitory
feeling locked in by its faux
intellect broken and low

waiting to be coaxed into unity

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Anonymous said…
This one was a little obscure...so perhaps it needs rewritten. However, it speaks to the surface way that we express emotions -- through our exclamatory speech. This faux emotionalism hides the true unity of mind and heart -- and masks the expression of it.
July 27, 2007 at 7:33 AM

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