didn't even see the dust / a happy tale

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Note: This is a song extension, in which I've responded to lyrics from a song. Please listen to the song first, or as you read my response.


dust rises
emphasizes
a carefree trail
doesn't fly far
cakes on the car
get the soap and pail
even if not seen
it's better clean
a happy tale

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